Question

[Nguyễn Long]

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Hello. My name is Long. I'm twelve years old. I'm a student at Le Dinh Chinh primary school. My school has a canteen where we can buy food and drink. In the central of the school, there is a flag hole. It not very tall. It is surrounded by trees and green fence. Under the trees, there are many stone chairs where the students eat and talk at the break time . The air is fresh. The schoolyard and football yard are very large. In my school, there are about 25 rooms, 800 students, a gym and 20 teachers. The hall is very large, too. The teachers are very interested in students, friendly and very clever. The students are very sporty and friendly. In each classroom, there are 18 desks, 18 tables, a big board, a waste basket and a lot of pictures on the wall. Some of its  is the picture of uncle Ho. It's very beautiful. Every Monday morning, we salute the flag in the school yard. In the school, I have a lot of friends. They all very kind and good. We are always best friend. I love my school very much because the teachers and the students are very good.

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Answer 1

[Hà Phương]

Hello. My name is Long. I'm twelve years old. I'm a student at Le Dinh Chinh primary school. My school has a canteen where we can buy food and drink. In the central of the school, there is a flag hole. It is not very tall. It is surrounded by trees and green fence. Under the trees, there are many stone chairs where the students eat and talk at the break time . The air is fresh. The schoolyard and football yard are very large. In my school, there are about 25 rooms, 800 students, a gym and 20 teachers. The hall is very large, too. The teachers are very interested in students, friendly and very clever. The students are very sporty and friendly. In each classroom, there are 18 desks, 18 tables, a big board, a waste basket and a lot of pictures on the wall. Some of its  is the picture of uncle Ho. It's very beautiful. Every Monday morning, we salute the flag in the school yard. In the school, I have a lot of friends. They all very kind and good. We are always best friend. I love my school very much because the teachers and the students are very good.

Answer 2

[Lê Nguyên Hạo]

Hello. My name is Long. I'm twelve years old. I'm a student at Le Dinh Chinh primary school. My school has a canteen where we can buy food and drink. In the central of the school, there is a flag pole. It is not very tall. It is surrounded by trees and green fences. Under the trees, there are many stone chairs where the students eat and talk at the break time . The air is fresh. The schoolyard and football yard are very large. In my school, there are about 25 rooms, 800 students, a gym and 20 teachers. The hall is very large, too. The teachers are very interested in students, friendly and very clever. The students are very sporty and friendly. In each classroom, there are 18 desks, 18 tables, a big board, a waste basket and a lot of pictures on the wall. Some of them  are the picture of uncle Ho. It's very beautiful. Every Monday morning, we salute the flag in the school yard. In the school, I have a lot of friends. They all very kind and good. We (are bỏ) always best friend. I love my school very much because the teachers and the students are very good.